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She gazes into my eyes....oh how they make my fear go away.
She silently askes me if she is going to die.
All I can do is nod my head.
The sword had pierced through her armor and gone clean though her body.
Her attacker lay dead, just feet away from us.
He was slain, not by me, but by a friendly arrow that had missed its target.

Rain begins to fall.
I cannot save her.
My tears mix with the rain and sweat.
In her last moments she won't see me cry for her.
She won't see me cry for the love we had shared these past fifteen years.

She closes her eyes....My fear returns.
I stand. The raging battle I face slowly calls my name.
I pick up her sword and raise my own.
I fight for her.....I fight for Lyanna....
©2007-2009 ~SymphonyComics
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i have no idea where this came from....

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:iconlys2313:
i like it anyway.....even if you did ask me about it earlier...

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:iconlawlesscomics:
dude those "spur of the moment" flows are the friggin best. This is complete even though it leaves a lot to wonder. It MAKES you want to read it a few times. That's the whole point to this sort of thing so you did a good job on this one. I wrote a song that sounds kinda like this.

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:iconcheungkinmen:
Dude, I love it, I was imagining the scene on th fly while reading this. It would make a good page, if only I had the time :( .

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:iconsymphonycomics:
Wow....i really thought this up as soon as I opened the "insert text here box"

I woke my best frind up to ask if this was weird.

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I'm sorry. I think i just blew your mind!
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Thanks.

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I'm sorry. I think i just blew your mind!
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Sorry i woke u up.

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I'm sorry. I think i just blew your mind!
:iconlys2313:
its alright....I'm eating Chinese....

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:iconawaii-tsubasa:
It seems a Requiem, would suit the name better, as it is a song for a fallen. Its quite good, well done.

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Reality is no more then the proving grounds for thesis, as such can anyone truly question their own existence if they can accept they are no more then a thesis themselves?-Necrafarius
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The musical terms actually have nothing to do with the stories or poems.....I label them based on my current feelings towards those who will read it.....

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